jazz 7 following today’s revisions, which will continue tomorrow
2:36 PM: yesterday’s revisions to jazz 9 made me take another look at jazz 7 , and i began feeling there was too much white, which was preventing the composition as a whole from declaring itself.
going to take our creek walk in 15 minutes, so i’ll continue my comments when we’re back.
BELOW: jazz 7 before & after today’s revisions
