11:23 AM: this morning i made some tweaks to kodo II. it needed to POP more and there were a few things that needed work on her hand, in the middle figure. it looks like she has only 3 fingers plus her thumb. in the photo, her pinky finger is folded under and thus not visible. after the work i just did, that hand looks more natural. as well, i painted over her face reflected in the mirror, since it was takking your attention away from the movement of the composition as a whole. i removed the protruding breast of that same middle figure. too many breasts!
BELOW: yesterday’s version is on the left