3:40 PM: i wasn’t happy with the modifications i made this morning, so, just as i was about to leave the studio and return to the house, i made further modifications, replacing the grey with yellow plus a few more things, such as the pink horizontal stripe on the upper left.
12:56 PM: i had taken celebration XII over to the house so that we could both evaluate. it became clear that it needed further work, so i brought it back this morning and made the modifications you see here. BELOW are the before and after images.
BELOW: celebration XII before (left) and after the modifications i made today