1:56 PM: the lower portion of gained vision IV looked way to heavy when i entered the studio this morning. i whited over it, intentionally leaving some of the underpainting visible. then i proceeded to work into it, using a few of my creek phostos as inspiration, and adding a triangle of green/yellow in the lower right corner., which may or may not remain.
i think it’s definitely an improvement over yesterday’s version, but i’m not yet sure whether it hangs together. i did want a much less cluttered surface with one focal point; in this case the figure up top. i owe a lot to matisse & diebenkorn (as diebenkorn owes a lot to matisse!)
looking at it now from 20+ feet, i’m seeing that the whited over portion below enlivens the entire composition in a way that couldn’t have been predicted, thereby becoming an element in my constant striving for the unpredictable!