a lighter blue for "jazz 11"/modifications to “jazz 12” / by Philip Tarlow

at work today on modifications to jazz 12

3PM: when i took jazz 12 back to the house to see how it looked there, we both agreed it needed more work. so i just finished making some modifications, while attempting to maintain the simplicity and flowing quality of the composition. tha was tricky, because this one emerged one day in a burst of energy. BELOW: the before & after

12:37 PM: the blues in jazz 11 looked a bit too dark as i’ve been gazing at it hanging on my studio wall. so this morning i lightened them. the BEFORE and AFTER are BELOW: