3:52 PM: after working on tweaks to jazz 14, i moved on to jazz 20, which had become far too busy yesterday. you’ll see the difference in the comparative images BELOW. i’ll probably do more tomorrow, but right now it’s definitely in a much better place.
jazz 20 as it looked yesterday (left) and just now
jazz 14 following today’s tweaks to the female figure.
12:47 PM: this morning i gave more definition to the female figure on the left-center so that she pops and becomes more of an anchor for the entire composition. from a distance, now that this anchor is in place, everything else in jazz 14 magically works!
so i’m getting ready to do more work on jazz 20, which became to complicated yesterday.