slight modification to watercolor/collage #!0 / by Philip Tarlow

1:22 PM: a dear friend caught something that bothered her in watercolor/collage 10. I worked on it just now & I think it has definitely improved! thanks W.L. !

the area that caught her eye is the brown swish of color on the lower left. as always, she was spot on. by the way, what that collaged area comes from is a piece of paper palette I used for oil painting.