changes to minoo and gashu / by Philip Tarlow

4:54 PM: at the very end of the day, as the winds pick up & the snow & cold move towards us from the north, I made a few slight but significant changes to gashu. compare this image with the one below on the right, and you’ll see some white marks on the rocks at the bottom that weren’t there, as well as a few blue ones, and a bit more definition in the white of the waterfall.

1:10 pm: yesterday, after studying minoo for a few days following my last intervention on October 2, I felt that the central portion of the composition needed wore work. so I made the changes you see ABOVE in the comparative before (left) & after photos. I think the addition of the waterfall on the upper left helps focus the eye, as do the trees.

what’s your opinion?