1:15 PM: following 3 very productive and gratifying days of intensive meetings with our actionlab team, i'm back, albeit briefly, in the studio. i'm a bit wacked out still, but i was able to make a small but important, i think, alteration to motion 13. the green bit at the very top kept grabbing my eye, so i did away with it, to the benefit of the entire composition. in addition, you will notice a white line tracing the top of the grey/brown triangle at the top, and a broken white line beneath at the bottom of the grey of the rectangular box-like rock at the bottom left.
one of the rewards of not being able to look at a new painting for a period of days is fresh vision. see what you think of the before (left) and after, BELOW: