simplifying "rain" / by Philip Tarlow

noon: yesterdays work on we found a way made rain look too busy. so, after a small addition to we found a way, i re-worked rain, making it a far less busy composition, thereby increasing, i believe it's mystery and power.

          rain as it looked yesterday afternoon                                     rain moments ago after a re-work

               we found a way  following a slight modification

             we found a way following a slight modification

and here's we found a way following today's slight modification