after living with stivari, originally created april 3, 2014, it seemed unresolved & kind of busy. my sense of space has shifted since then, so i began revising it today. revised version on the left.
now that they fixed the screen on our big sliding glass bedroom door facing the mountains to our east, which had been ripped to shreds by a bear, we sleep with the door all the way open so we can breathe in the fabulous air, scented with freshly damp piñon pines and watch the night sky as we fall asleep. on row 2, the fabulous night sky.