5/7/13 ni zan creek revisions, may 7&8 / by Philip Tarlow

the central 70% of the may 7th version was too busy. on may 8th i simplified it; maybe not enough.

on the morning of may 9th, it seems to me this painting is resolved!

see 4/29 & 4/28 posts for earlier history of this painting

5/7/13 version of ni zan creek 66x16"

acrylic & collaged paper on canvas

5/8/13 version